鲁达 高中入学考试书面表达评分标准
1.打分时，首先根据短文和语言表达初步决定自己所属的等级，然后根据该等级的要求衡量或调整等级，最后给分。
2． 本大题满分为15分，不设小数点以下分值。按五个档次给分。
3． 文中若出现真实的人名、校名，扣2分。
一档（13-15分）：包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇， 用词准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，具有较强的语言运用能力。
二档（10-12分）：基本包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，句子较通顺，表达较清楚，但有少量错误。
三档（7-9分）：内容包含了多数要点，语言表达过于简单，句子不够通顺，有部分语言错误，基本上不影响总体理解。
四档（4-6分）：只包含了少数要点，语言不规范，句子无条理，行文不连贯，语言错误严重，影响理解。
五档（0-3分）：只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语，语言错误多。
遣词与造句
遣词要准确地道，要注意词性与词的语法形式。造句要注意句子结构，符合英语五种基本句型：主+系+表；主+谓；主+谓+宾；主+谓+简宾+直宾；主+谓+宾+宾补。在造句上尽量体现结构的多变，体现英语句子的特点：词、短语和句子都可以作句子成分，成分中还可以有成分，从句中还可以有从句。初中阶段学习的三大从句（状语从句，定语从句，宾语从句）能够恰当使用。
1.文明出行
不文明行为（uncivilized behaviors）
Uncivilized behaviors have seriously affected our city’s image.
Uncivilized behavior is becoming a real problem for Guiling as a tourism city.
As a student and one of the citizens of Guiling, we must say no to uncivilized behaviors.
交通规则（traffic rules）
We must obey the traffic rules so that everybody in our city can enjoy a smooth and safe traveling.
Traffic rules are for anyone on the road so everybody should obey the traffic rules.
斑马线（zebra crossing）
When crossing the streets, we should walk on the zebra crossing.
Use the zebra crossing whenever we cross any road with a zebra crossing.
随意乱停放(park at your convenience )
When we drive or cycle out do not park our car or bicycle anywhere at our convenience.
交通信号灯（traffic light）
We mustn’t go across the street whenever the traffic lights turn red.
We should wait till the traffic lights turn green when crossing street.
翻越护栏（climb over the fence）
we mustn’t climb over the fence when crossing street.
２.公众场合的不文明行为（uncivilized behaviors in public place ）
随手乱扔（丢）垃圾(litter around)
When in public places we shouldn’t litter around to keep the environment clean.
Littering around is an uncivilized behavior so we should avoid it.
大声喧哗(speak or talk loudly)
Speaking or talking loudly is a rude behavior so we had better keep lower our voice in public places.
In order not to disturb others we should not speak or talk loudly in public places.
随地吐痰(spit anywhere)
Spitting anywhere is unhealthy both for you and people around so we must avoid it.
Don’t spit anywhere to keep our public place clean.
公共场所吸烟(smoke in public place)
Do not smoke in public places for the health of yourself and people around.
We mustn’t smoke in public places for the health of yourself and people around.
3.在家与学校（uncivilized behaviors at home and school）
尊敬老师与长辈(respect our teachers and elders)
We should respect our teachers and elders.
We should be respectful to our teachers and elders.
We should show respect for our teachers and elders.
礼貌友善待人(be friendly and kind to others)
Be friendly and kind to people around us.
To be a civilized person we should be friendly and kind to people around us.