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目录
内容
第A部分
读完后续写，测试古典原文
第B部分
阅读后引导速记书想法。
第C部分
写优秀的文章翻译
第D部分
润色篇章作文
第E部分
课后练笔巩固。
A部分阅读后经典原文考试更新
my best friend ' s mother was a social worker in Detroit，michigan.because of that，my friend Victoria and I were introduced early to
We did plenty of charity(慈善)work。we always had a good time，and continued to volunteer whenever we had time，Often even when we didn ' t . it became second nature。hair styles came and went，but Victoria and I found places to donate our time becat
one particular morning we signed up for ' paint the town '，An organization in Detroit to help low income home owners clean their houses . we we。
When the door opened，mymouthdid，too . standing there was a little old lady with wisps(一捆)of white hair and a purple apron()
Hello' she said，' I ' m Amelia . please come in and I will show you where to start . 'her smile shone brightly。“I am j
as she led us to the parts of her house that needed painting，my heart softened . here was one of the scariest looking houses in the city，But behind
Here were coming to helpher，and instead she was doing something for us-baking home made cookies and serving us tea！
:(1)续借语数应该是150个左右。
(2)请在答卷的相应位置回答如下。
There was no age barrier that day as we worked on Amelia's house.
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“Nonsense！” she criticized(批评).
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Part B读后续写思路引导
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了我和我的朋友维多利亚在她的母亲的影响下接触了志愿服务的世界。我们做了大量的慈善工作。我们报名参加了“粉刷城镇”，这是底特律一个帮助低收入房主清洁房屋的组织。我们被分配一个在城市的最糟糕的一个社区。但主人却是一个和蔼的老太太，我们在帮她的时候，她也在为我们做些事情，自制了曲奇饼，并端茶给我们喝。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“那天我们为阿米莉亚的房子工作，没有年龄障碍。”可知，第一段可描写作者和她的朋友和老奶奶相处的很好，交流了很多话题。
②由第二段首句内容“胡说!” 她批评道。可知，第二段可描写老奶奶的见解和看法，以及对作者的影响。
2.续写线索：帮刷墙——款待——交流——可怜——被嘲笑——见解
3.词汇激活
行为类
①一起走路：get near/accompany him/keep her company
②.回家：go back home/return home
③.拒绝：shake his head/decline/refuse politely/laugh at
情绪类
①.感谢：showing his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful
②.积极：positive attitude/act positively/keep it up
Part C写作优秀句式翻译
1．那天我们在阿米莉亚家工作时，没有年龄障碍。
2．阿米莉亚呆在附近，在我们画画时和我们交谈，告诉我们她的祖国爱尔兰，以及她是如何来到底特律的。
3．我为她住在附近这么可怜的地方感到很难过。
4．当我这样告诉她的时候，她嘲笑我。
5．胡话！她批评道（批评）。
6．“这是我的房子，即使它在我周围倒塌了。
7．我感到很高兴你们这些女孩来帮我解决这个问题。
8．我在这里很高兴。我看到了社区的变化，看到了人们来来又去，但我总是留下来。
9．我们可能在外部都有所不同，但在内部上，我们都在追求同一件事——社区。
10．没有什么比帮助别人更让你高兴的了。
11．当我在城里的不同地方做志愿者时，她对我说的话重回我脑海了。
参考答案：
1) There was no age barrier that day as we worked on Amelia's house.
2) Amelia stayed close by, talking to us as we painted, telling us about her native Ireland and how she came to Detroit.
3) I felt so sad for her living in such a poor part of the neighborhood with no one to keep her company.
4) When I told her so, she laughed at me.
5) “Nonsense！” she criticized( 批评).
6) “This is my house even if it is falling down around me.
7) I feel blessed that you girls came to help fix it up.
8) I'm happy here. I've watched the neighborhood change, and seen people come and go, but I always stay.
9) We may all be different on the outside, but on the inside, we are all just after the same thing—community.
10) Keep it up. Nothing will make you happier than helping other people.”
11) What she said to me replayed itself as I volunteered in different parts of the town.
Part D篇章写作润色
There was no age barrier that day as we worked on Amelia's house. Amelia stayed close by, talking to us as we painted, telling us about her native Ireland and how she came to Detroit. I felt so sad for her living in such a poor part of the neighborhood with no one to keep her company. When I told her so, she laughed at me.
“Nonsense！” she criticized( 批评). “This is my house even if it is falling down around me. I feel blessed that you girls came to help fix it up. I'm happy here. I've watched the neighborhood change, and seen people come and go, but I always stay. We may all be different on the outside, but on the inside, we are all just after the same thing—community. Keep it up. Nothing will make you happier than helping other people.”What she said to me replayed itself as I volunteered in different parts of the town.
Part E课后练笔巩固提升 .
Several years ago, I was living in New York and working for an airline, so I never got back home for Christmas. My Christmas was happy too with some other colleagues around. But in my heart I was sad because I couldn’t stay with my family. Sometimes my colleagues would say our Christmas was filled with tears. But this Christmas was different. I was lucky. I had the whole day off, which meant I could stay with my family on Christmas Eve.
When Christmas morning came, I awoke to a small hand rubbing my face. “Dad, Merry Christmas!” was all my younger son had time to say. He seemed to be racing against time. I knew he was hunting for gifts with his brother eagerly. I got downstairs just to see the two little boys’ faces as they looked at the pocket rockets Santa Claus had left them. I realized that the real Christmas was for the children who had deep belief in the amazing power of Santa Claus. At first, their fingers went almost shyly over their toys. When their inspection (检查) had been completed, the two boys ensured that the gifts were really delivered by Santa Claus and they dragged everything into the center of the living room.
Delight flooded the room. As their mother began giving out gifts, I smiled to myself, wondering how my unexpected gifts this year would be received. With so many Christmas spent outside, I had prepared so many gifts for my children and together with my wife I hid them in several secret places. But the children were excellent detectives and they found all of them. They were happily opening packages constantly thanking considerate Santa Claus for his kindness and ability to know their desires. But I had not received a single one. I knew they had forgotten my existence with my absence from their Christmas these years.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1:
I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily.
Paragraph 2:
Suddenly my wife walked up to me.
参考答案：
Paragraph l:
I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily. I was wondering whether I could get a gift when my younger son ran to me, who was really kind enough to save my face. He asked me to admire his gift which he deeply believed was carefully chosen by Santa Claus. Hesaid happily that he would share some of the gifts of his and allow me to choose one from them. I thanked him from the bottom of my heart, still feeling disappointed.
Paragraph 2:
Suddenly my wife walked up to me. It seemed that she had guessed how I felt. She asked me to look at the Christmas tree which was decorated with so many boxes. I think she was showing off her efforts on the decoration but she took off a small box and passed it to me smiling and saying it was for me. I opened it and saw a letter which read We will never forget you. Merry Christmas! Under the letter was a watch which was clicking with delight. I was moved to tears.
读后续写（二）
目录 | 内容 |
Part A | 读后续写模考经典原文 |
Part B | 读后续写思路引导 |
Part C | 写作优秀句式翻译 |
Part D | 篇章写作润色 |
Part E | 课后练笔巩固提升 |
Part A读后续写模考经典原文
Most young kids are very self-centered most of the time. It’s like their brain meters are stuck on “selfish.” This certainly described me, until I met my dear grandmother.
My father had been born in Japan, and he had many old, old photographs of the palatial (宫殿般的) estate that had belonged to his family through many generations. He told me stories of gorgeous rooms full of golden furniture and silk wall papers. He also described magnificent gardens, full of the sweet scents of exotic flowers and the gentle thin stream of graceful fountains.
From all these, I figured my grandmother must be rich. I had never met her before she came from Japan, but at eight, I reasoned that if I were nice to her, she would take me back to Japan to live in luxury. It was a good plan, I thought, and I vowed to spend time with my grandmother so she would grow to love me and want me to accompany her upon her return.
We went to pick her up at the airport. “There she is!” my father called. I expected to see some royal kimono-clad (穿着和服的) creature like I’d seen in pictures. Instead, I saw a tiny woman with silver hair, wearing an ordinary blue suit. She did not look wealthy to me. Still, I vowed to be attentive, to make myself indispensable to her during her stay.
To get closer to her, I flattered her into telling me stories about old Japan. She enjoyed making needlecraft with delicate designs, and as she worked, she wove tales of Japanese legends and history as delicate and beautiful as the designs she created. I listened, fascinated. Her words were a mix of the two languages, so I didn’t completely understand everything at first. Interestingly, however, as her English improved, so did my understanding of Japanese.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1:
No one spoke of her going back, and I was like an ant on a hot griddle.
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Para 2:
My dreams of a luxurious life had been broken.
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Part B读后续写思路引导
本文以人物为线索为展开，作者的父亲小时候出生在日本，通过之前的照片作者推测祖母的家庭肯定很富裕；作者想着讨好祖母，希望祖母带他去日本生活；祖母来了，但并不是穿着和服来的，而是穿着一件普通的蓝色西装；作者主动和祖母接近，祖母跟他讲着日本的历史传说故事，祖母的英文水平进步了，作者对日本的理解也随之加深。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“没人说她要回去，“我”就像一只热锅上的蚂蚁。”可知，第一段可描写作者急于去日本过奢侈的生活，所以主动向祖母询问归期，并希望祖母带自己一起回日本，以及祖母的回应。
②由第二段首句内容“我奢华生活的梦想破灭了。”可知，第二段可描写作者梦想破裂后的感受，以及最后作者意识到真正的财富是什么。
2.续写线索：焦虑担忧——鼓起勇气——解释说明——梦想破灭——驱散悲伤
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.鼓起勇气：work up my courage/take heart of grace /get up the courage
②.解释说明：explain/make clear/account for
③.梦想破灭：be broken/be shattered/fall through
④.驱散悲伤：sweep my sadness away/disperse the sad
情绪类
①.焦虑担忧：anxious/worried/alarming
Part C写作优秀句式翻译
12．没有人说她回去，我就像一只热烤锅上的蚂蚁。
13．但我急于开始我的日本奢侈生活，所以有一天晚上我鼓起了勇气。
14．“奶奶，回到日本，能带我去吗？”我胆怯地问。
15．虽然有点惊讶，但她从刺绣中抬起头来，眼睛深情地望着我。
16．“不，我现在住在这里。但你为什么要离开？
17．所以我告诉她了那些故事。
18．她笑着，抚摸着我的头，解释说。她的曾祖父确实有很多财富，但战争摧毁了一切
19．现在祖父去世了，她想和家人住在这里。
20．我对奢侈生活的梦想已经破灭了。
21．一开始我很失望，甚至把自己锁在房间里，哭了很长一段时间。
22．突然间，奶奶和我们住在一起的事实驱散了我的悲伤。
23．我曾试着让她爱我，这样我就可以和她一起去日本了。
24．我很快就明白了，我不需要日本的财富。我的祖母就在家里给了我更多的财富。
参考答案：
12) No one spoke of her going back, and I was like an ant on a hot griddle.
13) But I was anxious to commence my life of Japanese luxury, so one evening I worked up my courage.
14) “When you go back to Japan, grandma, will you take me?” I asked timidly.
15) Though a bit surprised, she looked up from her embroidery, her eyes peeking lovingly at me.
16) “No, I live here now. But why do you want to leave?”
17) So I told her about those stories.
18) She smiled, stroking my head, and explained. Her great grandfather did have much wealth, but the war destroyed everything.
19) Now that grandfather had passed away, she wished to remain here with family.
20) My dreams of a luxurious life had been broken.
21) At first so disappointed was I that I even locked myself in the room, crying for quite a while.
22) Then suddenly the fact that grandma was staying with us swept my sadness away.
23) I had tried to make her love me so that I could join her in Japan.
24) I soon understood that I didn't need the wealth of Japan. My grandmother had given me far greater riches right here at home.
Part D篇章写作润色
No one spoke of her going back, and I was like an ant on a hot griddle. But I was anxious to commence my life of Japanese luxury, so one evening I worked up my courage. “When you go back to Japan, grandma, will you take me?” I asked timidly. Though a bit surprised, she looked up from her embroidery, her eyes peeking lovingly at me. “No, I live here now. But why do you want to leave?” So I told her about those stories. She smiled, stroking my head, and explained. Her great grandfather did have much wealth, but the war destroyed everything. Now that grandfather had passed away, she wished to remain here with family.
My dreams of a luxurious life had been broken. At first so disappointed was I that I even locked myself in the room, crying for quite a while. Then suddenly the fact that grandma was staying with us swept my sadness away. I had tried to make her love me so that I could join her in Japan. I soon understood that I didn't need the wealth of Japan. My grandmother had given me far greater riches right here at home.
Part E课后练笔巩固提升 .
“Ouch!” I howled in pain as I dropped the hammer onto my foot. I felt foolish.
It was pouring with rain, and, lame for a moment, I hopped around to the driver's side.
“No luck?” said George. We had a flat tyre (轮胎) and I was trying to change the wheel. But it was stuck firm.
We had driven ten hours along the road through the jungle without seeing another soul. In the distance was an ox working in the field.
“So what do we do now? How can we find a garage?” asked George, as I got back into the car.
About fifteen minutes later, the rain stopped. Out of the jungle came an old woman. She walked towards us carrying something long and thin.
“Uh, oh, here comes danger!” said George, “ She’s got a spear.”
She was wearing traditional garments, with short sleeves, a colorful necklace and other jewelry. As she got closer, we saw the spear was just a wooden pole. I got out.
“Hello!” I said, in English. “Can you help us?” I pointed to the wheel.
She stared at it, and then made a gesture to follow her back to the jungle. George and I looked at each other, and then set off after her.
Soon we came to a tent under some trees. It had a firm framework of wooden poles, like the one the woman was carrying, covered with heavy cloth, and fastened with rope made of some kind of loose plant fiber. All round were corn plants. It was harvest time for the grain, and a spade, a fork and other tools were lying on the ground. Nearby were some chicks and a rooster, and a pig tied to a post.
The woman folded back a cloth and invited us in. My eyes had to adjust to the darkness inside. The tent was furnished with a few mats on the floor, and a low table with a teapot. She picked up a photo and showed it to us. Was it her husband? The man in the photo was bare to the waist. He looked much too young. She was probably a widow (寡妇). Maybe her son or her nephew?
Our hostess poured some tea, and watched smiling as we drank.
“Say something,” said George.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1:
I was wondering what to say when I heard the sound of footsteps out of the tent.
Paragraph 2:
Together we walked back to the car.
参考答案：
Paragraph 1:
I was wondering what to say when I heard the sound of footsteps out of the tent. We both looked up. It was exactly the young man in the photo but looked much stronger. The woman said something to him, looking at us smiling. “Need some Mg?” he asked. It’s amazing he was speaking very good English! George and I looked at each other, eyes lit up. “Yes, and we were wondering if you could have one of our tyres changed.” “Follow me!” he said, sounding like sort of an order.
Paragraph 2:
We got up and together walked back to the car. The man grabbed the wheel with one hand and a spanner with the other. With an outburst of shout, the tyre was loosened up. “You just need a bit of effort. Haha!” George and I stood there dumfounded watching him finishing the whole job, gratitude and admiration rushing in my heart. The knot that had been tired up by the pain in my foot, the cold soaking rain and the stubborn flat tyre was loosened up too, in the warm tea from the woman, the heroic shout of the man, the mountain view in the distance and the joy of being able to set off again.